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Fri Jul 17, 2009, 10:48 AM
Okay, so, to test how I will make the Aliens: Terra project, I may do a prequel, using the Predators at the beginning and end of the story. The main story is a tale of an ancient war- told by Blade, the last "pure" South Tribe. The war story is about where their honor comes from hunting. The South Tribe was a massive state of Blooded Yautja who believed that their government should be ruled by elder hunters. Hunting and the honor and rules from hunting formed their government. The North Guard government wanted to keep the Yautja race the way it was "supposed" to be. Hunting was just a sport, to them, and didn't dictate the fate of their citizens. The North Guard state, slightly larger than the South Tribe, was seen as "Bad Blood" by the South Tribe, and their honor decreed that they were to be executed for their weakness. In between the two states was a third "state" known as The Keep. This area had no "claimed" territory and was populated by Yautja who wanted no official government, who were out of state workers, and hunters from both states. During this period of Yautja history, technology was in its earliest stages. Weapons did not shoot plasma, the ability to turn invisible to an unaided eye was a dream, and armor was made less durable and were crafted by hitting a hammer on hot steel.

The South Tribe and the North Guard fought to control the worlds government alongside or against the Keepers who either chose a side or died defending themselves or their family. Many perished under ancient styled blades and projectiles. Finally, the South Tribe proved themselves strongest and defeated and executed every North Guard Yautja and those who sided with them. The world would then evolve stronger into a physically strong, honorable, and technologically advanced place. Eventually, the Yautja had accessed the stars. The hunt could truly begin, the government would evolve. Colonies formed, and formed new governments based off the original. The South Tribe government system has ended, leaving those that were born during the last of their kind. The youngest Yautja to be born during the last years of the system, a masculine named Blade, will be the very last born under the system. His kind's legacy dies with him.

I'd love some feedback about this story, this shouldn't take long to make, since I don't really plan on coloring it and the story is apparently very easy for me to create. It should be a fairly short comic. About 5-7 pages, or so.

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DUDE O_O! I didn't realize you had a DA xD lol. YAY!!! Your art is always amazing :D! *watches*

Niriminaltase ^^!

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Danke for das watch. Nriminaltase!

Did Gary tell you all I'm doing concept art for Soul AI?

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no problem ^^. Thanks for the watch back :glomp: ^_^!!!!

O.o... no he didn't. That is AWESOME :D!!!

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I have been EXTREAMLY busy lately!!! I am sorry to everyone I watch for not commenting!!!
Do you haz messanger? MSN?

Probably because this news is recent. I proofread his story yesterday. It's really cool so far.

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Of course ^_^. wolfartist101@hotmail.com
MSN is the reason I spend like all day on the computer xDD lol.

Yeah, probably O.o. Awesome :D!
Yeah, from what I have heard it sounds amazing ^^!!!

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< 3 Aliens and Predators, also. Cool stuff.

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Thanks for the fav and the comment. I'll check out your stuff as soon as I press send. Which was a while ago, lol.

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